Instrument Paper Comment
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Contents
LATEX style
- Bunch of \newcommand (and similar) defined after \begin{document} in the cmbs4_instbook.tex, although it doesn't seem to cause any failures, it feels like many of those commands should live in the preamble. See for example the ADS abbreviations. It would be useful to clean up this file to improve readability. I think it generally makes it easier for people to contribute to the document.
General comment
- comments
Acronym Table: Bibliography
- comments
Introduction and Conclusion
- comments
Telescope design
- Table 2-1: BICEP array, BICEP3, SPIDER info need to be added (Lorenzo: by 6/1/2017 morning)
Receiver optics
- Improved Sections 3.5 and 3.7 intro? (Jeff)
Focal plane optical coupling
- capture CLASS technology (waiting for input from Karwan: by 6/1/2017 noon)
Focal plane sensor and readout
- comment
