Instrument Paper Comment
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- Style consistency (suggested by Maria)
- in the text use words for indicate numbers for example: from "1 or 2 bands" to "one or two bands". Another example: "three-axis mount" instead of "3-axis mount". But for expressions as 1000 TESes, use numbers not words.
- Preferring CMB-S4 instead of S4 (few times in the next S4 was used).
- Stage-II instead of Stage-2 or stage-2.
- Numbered items listed in the text: (i), (ii).
- ~ for space doesn't work. Use instead \, .
- Medium size space between number and unit of measurement: 15\,GHz instead of 15 GHz or 15GHz.
- Ranges of numbers, for example: (120--280)\,GHz instead of 120-280 GHz (since GHz refers to the entire range).
- Lowercase for indicating the name of materials: alumina instead of Alumina.
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Contents
General comment / LATEX style etc
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Executive summary
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Introduction
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Telescope design
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Receiver optics
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Focal plane optical coupling
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Focal plane sensor and readout
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