Difference between revisions of "Instrument Paper Comment"
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| + | The Telescope Design and Focal Plane Sensors and Readout sections were a bit choppier -- with different levels of paragraphs and subsections. For example, the paragraph about computer simulations for FSLs might be too detailed for the Executive Summary. | ||
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| + | In the receiver optics part of the Executive Summary, the first paragraph implies that larger sizes would be nice, but then each bullet point afterwards says that larger sizes are *needed*. It seems sort of contradictory. | ||
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=== Introduction === | === Introduction === | ||
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=== Focal plane optical coupling === | === Focal plane optical coupling === | ||
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=== Focal plane sensor and readout === | === Focal plane sensor and readout === | ||
* Please add comment here | * Please add comment here | ||
Revision as of 08:23, 26 January 2017
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Contents
General comment / LATEX style etc
- Please add comment here
Executive summary
- In the Executive Summary, I liked the Receiver Optics and Focal Plane Optical Coupling parts. They get the basics across "smoothly".
The Telescope Design and Focal Plane Sensors and Readout sections were a bit choppier -- with different levels of paragraphs and subsections. For example, the paragraph about computer simulations for FSLs might be too detailed for the Executive Summary.
In the receiver optics part of the Executive Summary, the first paragraph implies that larger sizes would be nice, but then each bullet point afterwards says that larger sizes are *needed*. It seems sort of contradictory.
Introduction
- Please add comment here
Telescope design
- Please add comment here
Receiver optics
- Please add comment here
Focal plane optical coupling
- Need to define ARC
Focal plane sensor and readout
- Please add comment here
