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=== LATEX style ===
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# Bunch of \newcommand (and similar) defined after \begin{document} in the cmbs4_instbook.tex, although it doesn't seem to cause any failures, it feels like many of those commands should live in the preamble. See for example the ADS abbreviations. It would be useful to clean up this file to improve readability. I think it generally makes it easier for people to contribute to the document.
  
=== General comment / LATEX style etc===
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=== General comment ===  
* Please add comment here
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# comments
  
=== Executive summary ===
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=== Acronym Table: Bibliography ===
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# comments
  
=== Introduction ===
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=== Introduction and Conclusion ===
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# comments
  
 
=== Telescope design ===
 
=== Telescope design ===
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# Table 2-1: BICEP array, BICEP3, SPIDER info need to be added (Lorenzo: by 6/1/2017 morning)
  
 
=== Receiver optics ===
 
=== Receiver optics ===
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# Improved Sections 3.5 and 3.7 intro? (Jeff)
  
 
=== Focal plane optical coupling ===
 
=== Focal plane optical coupling ===
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# capture CLASS technology (waiting for input from Karwan: by 6/1/2017 noon)
  
 
=== Focal plane sensor and readout ===
 
=== Focal plane sensor and readout ===
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# comment

Latest revision as of 09:32, 1 June 2017

Please add comments in appropriate section: You can also send comments to Aritoki Suzuki at asuzuki@berkeley.edu

LATEX style

  1. Bunch of \newcommand (and similar) defined after \begin{document} in the cmbs4_instbook.tex, although it doesn't seem to cause any failures, it feels like many of those commands should live in the preamble. See for example the ADS abbreviations. It would be useful to clean up this file to improve readability. I think it generally makes it easier for people to contribute to the document.

General comment

  1. comments

Acronym Table: Bibliography

  1. comments

Introduction and Conclusion

  1. comments

Telescope design

  1. Table 2-1: BICEP array, BICEP3, SPIDER info need to be added (Lorenzo: by 6/1/2017 morning)

Receiver optics

  1. Improved Sections 3.5 and 3.7 intro? (Jeff)

Focal plane optical coupling

  1. capture CLASS technology (waiting for input from Karwan: by 6/1/2017 noon)

Focal plane sensor and readout

  1. comment