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You can also send comments to Aritoki Suzuki at asuzuki@berkeley.edu
  
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When editing, please follow style suggested by Maria
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* '''Style consistency (suggested by Maria)'''
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** in the text use words for indicate numbers for example: from "1 or 2 bands" to "one or two bands". Another example: "three-axis mount" instead of "3-axis mount". But for expressions as 1000 TESes, use numbers not words.
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** Preferring CMB-S4 instead of S4 (few times in the next S4 was used).
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** Stage-II instead of Stage-2 or stage-2.
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** Numbered items listed in the text: (i), (ii).
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** ~ for space doesn't work. Use instead \, .
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** Medium size space between number and unit of measurement: 15\,GHz instead of 15 GHz or 15GHz.
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** Ranges of numbers, for example: (120--280)\,GHz instead of 120-280 GHz (since GHz refers to the entire range).
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** Lowercase for indicating the name of materials: alumina instead of Alumina.
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** Caption of figures/tables:\emph{ (Top) bla bla bla bla. (Left) bla bla bla}.
  
 
=== General comment / LATEX style etc===
 
=== General comment / LATEX style etc===

Revision as of 11:32, 12 January 2017

Please add comments in appropriate section: You can also send comments to Aritoki Suzuki at asuzuki@berkeley.edu

When editing, please follow style suggested by Maria

  • Style consistency (suggested by Maria)
    • in the text use words for indicate numbers for example: from "1 or 2 bands" to "one or two bands". Another example: "three-axis mount" instead of "3-axis mount". But for expressions as 1000 TESes, use numbers not words.
    • Preferring CMB-S4 instead of S4 (few times in the next S4 was used).
    • Stage-II instead of Stage-2 or stage-2.
    • Numbered items listed in the text: (i), (ii).
    • ~ for space doesn't work. Use instead \, .
    • Medium size space between number and unit of measurement: 15\,GHz instead of 15 GHz or 15GHz.
    • Ranges of numbers, for example: (120--280)\,GHz instead of 120-280 GHz (since GHz refers to the entire range).
    • Lowercase for indicating the name of materials: alumina instead of Alumina.
    • Caption of figures/tables:\emph{ (Top) bla bla bla bla. (Left) bla bla bla}.

General comment / LATEX style etc

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Executive summary

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Introduction

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Telescope design

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Receiver optics

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Focal plane optical coupling

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Focal plane sensor and readout

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